Your haiku is wonderful! It feels so different...has that emotional impact. Great happiness about the blue sky...which is what was more awesome than the crow. Thank you, JzB.
I like this a lot.. a caw without a purpose .. this can mean so much .. or so little, and just maybe it really doesn't matter, but at the end what is it except an observation.
I, too, took the poem to mean that there was no cawing going on ... but now it seems like it could go both ways. Perhaps this poem reflects what we bring to it ....? Very nice.
Undoubtedly he loves the sound of his own voice!
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Lovely haiku with crow cawing to the world ~ !
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I took "calls out to no one" to mean silence
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why does he not sing the blues
against such a sky
cheers
JzB
Your haiku is wonderful! It feels so different...has that emotional impact. Great happiness about the blue sky...which is what was more awesome than the crow. Thank you, JzB.
DeleteI like this a lot.. a caw without a purpose .. this can mean so much .. or so little, and just maybe it really doesn't matter, but at the end what is it except an observation.
ReplyDeleteI, too, took the poem to mean that there was no cawing going on ... but now it seems like it could go both ways. Perhaps this poem reflects what we bring to it ....? Very nice.
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