Easing my way back into writing with mindfulness, introspection, and writing challenges.
"Heat off the back of autumn" is a magnificent image :)
out of the darkness , clarity ~ Wonderful haiku!artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)
lovely phrasing.
What a wonderful and spiritual take on 'hot springs' Maggie ... i am so glad to see you here again ... you were missed ...Chėvrefeuille (a.k.a. Basho2012)
Lovely...that second line...awesome!!
It's true.. hot springs revive like nothing else.. I love this haiku.. Your poetry is as strong as always
May that clarity continue...forever...Wasteland Hot Springs
Love the wording in this haiku ... something classical about it .. very nice indeed.
"Heat off the back of autumn" is a magnificent image :)
ReplyDeleteout of the darkness , clarity ~ Wonderful haiku!
ReplyDeleteartmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)
lovely phrasing.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful and spiritual take on 'hot springs' Maggie ... i am so glad to see you here again ... you were missed ...
ReplyDeleteChėvrefeuille (a.k.a. Basho2012)
Lovely...that second line...awesome!!
ReplyDeleteIt's true.. hot springs revive like nothing else.. I love this haiku.. Your poetry is as strong as always
ReplyDeleteMay that clarity continue...forever...
ReplyDeleteWasteland Hot Springs
Love the wording in this haiku ... something classical about it .. very nice indeed.
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