Sunday, September 14, 2014

CD: Change in the Air

Carpe Diem #562 ~ Hot Springs




smoky mist rises
heat off the back of autumn
reveals new clarity



8 comments:

  1. "Heat off the back of autumn" is a magnificent image :)

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  2. out of the darkness , clarity ~ Wonderful haiku!

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

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  3. What a wonderful and spiritual take on 'hot springs' Maggie ... i am so glad to see you here again ... you were missed ...

    ChÄ—vrefeuille (a.k.a. Basho2012)

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  4. Lovely...that second line...awesome!!

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  5. It's true.. hot springs revive like nothing else.. I love this haiku.. Your poetry is as strong as always

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  6. Love the wording in this haiku ... something classical about it .. very nice indeed.

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