CD: "Autumn Leaves"

Carpe Diem's Tan Renga Challenge #20

Joanne's "Autumn Leaves"

Transform Joanne's haiku into a tan renga by adding two more lines (traditionally seven syllables each). I broke tradition slightly.




autumn leaves
myriad shades red and gold
begin to fall as snow        
(Joanne)


blanketing the brown earth
silently in downy white



 

CD: Virgin Snow

Carpe Diem #63

 

Gary Gay's "New Snow"

Write a new haiku in the same sense, spirit and tone as this one by Gary Gay:

new snow--
the path you made last night 
has gone with you
(c) Garry Gay

My inspired haiku:

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virgin snow ~

only tiny bird feet 

path unknown