tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post3548477806511425608..comments2023-09-28T03:24:44.018-04:00Comments on Falling Into Me: Trifecta: Mind Shadows (4)Maggie Gracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-61670821894280679242013-05-10T01:00:28.407-04:002013-05-10T01:00:28.407-04:00The prompt sort of made me jump ahead on this. Now...The prompt sort of made me jump ahead on this. Now will have to figure out how to back up. lol. Glad you like the elements!Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-27014552082308415622013-05-10T00:32:09.627-04:002013-05-10T00:32:09.627-04:00Whoa!Artificial insemination-concentration camps,N...Whoa!Artificial insemination-concentration camps,NASA head & secret Royal societies-the makings of a real potboiler here Maggie!Can't wait to read the rest of the story-keep them coming:-)Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-51158162154970552072013-05-09T23:33:17.144-04:002013-05-09T23:33:17.144-04:00I didn't know that! Very interesting. Must res...I didn't know that! Very interesting. Must research that.Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-5394619899781612512013-05-09T23:16:54.592-04:002013-05-09T23:16:54.592-04:00This is something many an adopted kid has consider...This is something many an adopted kid has considering. Interesting take.Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16492626287830278024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-46003955217372653482013-05-09T22:17:13.800-04:002013-05-09T22:17:13.800-04:00Am sorry you found reading this jarring. I don'...Am sorry you found reading this jarring. I don't mind the critique. I did reread it and am not finding your references. Maybe others will make similar comments. I do want to continue to improve this story. Thank you for being open about your impressions.Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-46203493698430364032013-05-09T22:13:31.404-04:002013-05-09T22:13:31.404-04:00Thank you, KDJ and Amy for your comments and wanti...Thank you, KDJ and Amy for your comments and wanting more. Hoping I can continue to please.Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-53655910778165288772013-05-09T21:21:07.611-04:002013-05-09T21:21:07.611-04:00Maggie, you really know how to write a cliffhanger...Maggie, you really know how to write a cliffhanger. I'm like K Dillman above; you had me at "she sensed her mother's egg was part of her being." An intriguing segment, leaves you hungry for more. Thanks, Maggie! AmyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-119256806205204432013-05-09T11:09:00.218-04:002013-05-09T11:09:00.218-04:00Wow, so much packed into this short story! In the ...Wow, so much packed into this short story! In the first two lines, I felt a lot of pain for this character. Nice work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-89595743123136537062013-05-09T04:36:19.341-04:002013-05-09T04:36:19.341-04:00It's intriguing and your premise is one that w...It's intriguing and your premise is one that would be nice to explore I think.<br />However I would advise working on your launguage and expression a little because even where you are saying something good, the flow of the whole thing kept jarring at me a little which is a problem when reading short pieces like this. <br />Hope you don't mind the critique.<br />Cheers...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-25030904809592967202013-05-08T17:39:16.147-04:002013-05-08T17:39:16.147-04:00Yes, they will! Except the "conspiracy theory...Yes, they will! Except the "conspiracy theory" you see is documented history. Most don't know that. As long as it makes the story exciting... Thank you, Steph!Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-49613150786753353862013-05-08T17:37:07.609-04:002013-05-08T17:37:07.609-04:00It is more twisted than usual but it's also fu...It is more twisted than usual but it's also further into the story. Will have to back up now. It's just where the prompt led me. Glad you like twisted :))Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-43534065947019542192013-05-08T15:33:17.345-04:002013-05-08T15:33:17.345-04:00I do like this a lot - just a little twisted and w...I do like this a lot - just a little twisted and with hints of a greater story yet to be told.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17094349723028487644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-27127754976844033322013-05-08T15:03:46.435-04:002013-05-08T15:03:46.435-04:00Sam, you are so kind. Thank you for reading and sh...Sam, you are so kind. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts!Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-3370755780658698752013-05-08T14:35:29.264-04:002013-05-08T14:35:29.264-04:00Wow Maggie I've read all the way down from Pre...Wow Maggie I've read all the way down from Prelude to here. What a great set of writing - you are busy and very talented.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-53891501482295916092013-05-08T05:43:10.207-04:002013-05-08T05:43:10.207-04:00I really like the digression into her art.I really like the digression into her art.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-63450893692794978512013-05-08T00:52:34.106-04:002013-05-08T00:52:34.106-04:00This was dark and intriguing. I really like this ...This was dark and intriguing. I really like this character!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01628986566011233882noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-21422569999072666972013-05-07T23:51:59.656-04:002013-05-07T23:51:59.656-04:00Conspiracy theories, royal blood, and intrigue - g...Conspiracy theories, royal blood, and intrigue - got me hooked. Those royals will go to any lengths to maintain their line to the throne. Mysterious - well done!stephhttp://peopledothingswiththeirlives.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-69268501366067576392013-05-07T16:39:26.039-04:002013-05-07T16:39:26.039-04:00This is such an interesting story. Thank you LM x...This is such an interesting story. Thank you LM xLyssa Medanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07350926829113722058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-62433791628816554792013-05-07T16:16:44.938-04:002013-05-07T16:16:44.938-04:00I love fairytale, magical, king, queen stories. Wh...I love fairytale, magical, king, queen stories. What you have written is great.Ann Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17759967601352382204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-24302578426150019042013-05-07T13:47:05.509-04:002013-05-07T13:47:05.509-04:00Thank you, Ann. For the purpose of my story, thoug...Thank you, Ann. For the purpose of my story, though, the royal blood is an essential component. I agree with your last statement in real life!Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-75137632210004835152013-05-07T13:45:50.383-04:002013-05-07T13:45:50.383-04:00Yep, mixing fact with fiction. Evil US. hehe And,...Yep, mixing fact with fiction. Evil US. hehe And, thank you!Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-54742076140458562192013-05-07T13:44:48.533-04:002013-05-07T13:44:48.533-04:00Valerie, I think you are my #1 fan for this story....Valerie, I think you are my #1 fan for this story. Thank you!Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-14018139806194504912013-05-07T10:18:46.174-04:002013-05-07T10:18:46.174-04:00This is really an intriguing piece.
This is not a ...This is really an intriguing piece.<br />This is not a commentary on what you have written but a point of view item. You have written a really good piece. I'm an older American and my connotation of royalty is inbred and privilege. Anyone regardless of birth can achieve given the right circumstances. Ann Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17759967601352382204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-52832617642292070032013-05-07T09:55:57.030-04:002013-05-07T09:55:57.030-04:00Oh Maggie! Wow! I am hooked...can't wait to ...Oh Maggie! Wow! I am hooked...can't wait to find out what is really going on!Valerie Boersmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08372768206512562126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-10266573577256522002013-05-07T07:25:22.335-04:002013-05-07T07:25:22.335-04:00Great... thickening plot here. Great... thickening plot here. brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com