tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post1423502102921755919..comments2023-09-28T03:24:44.018-04:00Comments on Falling Into Me: Trifecta: Mind Shadows/Behind The Shower CurtainMaggie Gracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-52982947146068612212013-04-21T13:27:05.947-04:002013-04-21T13:27:05.947-04:00A fan :)) Thank you! Hadn't intended on buildi...A fan :)) Thank you! Hadn't intended on building this as a story but seems to be moving in that direction. Hope I don't disappoint.Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-86732947524762060622013-04-21T08:39:35.513-04:002013-04-21T08:39:35.513-04:00I've been following this tale since i found yo...I've been following this tale since i found your site and it gets better and more intense each installment. Thank you so much for the disturbingness (was that a real word before today? I hope not)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17094349723028487644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-9460356549248065472013-04-21T01:33:42.805-04:002013-04-21T01:33:42.805-04:00Good job narrating! I especially liked the way yo...Good job narrating! I especially liked the way you described how scared she was. The cocking of the gun was spot on!Yvonnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08038918668619367960noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-45502381734027836092013-04-20T23:08:54.662-04:002013-04-20T23:08:54.662-04:00Fictionalized reality. Reality can be terrifying a...Fictionalized reality. Reality can be terrifying as Boston showed us this week. Hoping to develop story in a way that really helps those not having grown up with trauma what it is like. Appreciate your feedback and your visit!Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-87966900118334634882013-04-20T20:45:11.735-04:002013-04-20T20:45:11.735-04:00Wow, this is incredibly terrifying. Wow, this is incredibly terrifying. H.L. Pauffhttp://hlpauff.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-90470551843022827812013-04-19T22:42:08.233-04:002013-04-19T22:42:08.233-04:00Atreyee, TMW, and biancanoire, thank you for your ...Atreyee, TMW, and biancanoire, thank you for your thoughts after reading the story. The emotions you are expressing are the emotions that an adult remembering childhood trauma feels. Unsettling indeed. Am trying to keep going but from MacKenzie's perspective as opposed to therapist perspective. My personal challenge.Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-42066516751995079722013-04-19T22:09:48.859-04:002013-04-19T22:09:48.859-04:00Unsettling, this. Very much so.Unsettling, this. Very much so.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-48716565124799824052013-04-18T23:04:43.647-04:002013-04-18T23:04:43.647-04:00Slipping sanity is always terrifying. You conveye...Slipping sanity is always terrifying. You conveyed this aspect frighteningly well. Great job!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-58336790169379472892013-04-18T15:51:55.332-04:002013-04-18T15:51:55.332-04:00Chillingly scary!No wonder she is getting edgier!I...Chillingly scary!No wonder she is getting edgier!I shudder to think what's going on behind that "curtain" in her subconscious mind-rather what went on?Looking forward to reading the next part:-)Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-47119110886947169692013-04-18T13:43:54.778-04:002013-04-18T13:43:54.778-04:00Thank you, Ann. Am going to attempt a next segment...Thank you, Ann. Am going to attempt a next segment. I feel challenged by all the comments.Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-16923757896185537772013-04-18T13:00:59.711-04:002013-04-18T13:00:59.711-04:00Part two, creepy, creepy, creepier. I can't wa...Part two, creepy, creepy, creepier. I can't wait to see why she has all these visions. Congratulations on your win last week with part 1.Ann Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17759967601352382204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-3156713611461402132013-04-18T12:41:38.403-04:002013-04-18T12:41:38.403-04:00Thank you Thomas and Renee for your kind comments ...Thank you Thomas and Renee for your kind comments and for taking the time to read my story! Greatly appreciated.Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-65467861448882028032013-04-18T11:41:48.716-04:002013-04-18T11:41:48.716-04:00Great ending with the television triggering her sc...Great ending with the television triggering her scream. It shows just how close to the edge she is.<br />Great job!Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-10550916042160576512013-04-17T18:49:43.402-04:002013-04-17T18:49:43.402-04:00Great to see the continuation of the previous piec...Great to see the continuation of the previous piece, and I love the way the tension builds and builds.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17094349723028487644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-18682516317161855272013-04-17T12:32:59.322-04:002013-04-17T12:32:59.322-04:00Thanks to all who visited and read my entry and to...Thanks to all who visited and read my entry and took time to comment. Went out of my comfort zone for this one. Don't know how to continue without going into psychology of it. Perhaps a challenge to ponder for the future.Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-87696693960971200812013-04-17T09:37:49.914-04:002013-04-17T09:37:49.914-04:00This is disturbingly creepy It's like all of t...This is disturbingly creepy It's like all of those spooky psychological horror movies. Nice continuation from the previous part. <br /><br />Thanks for linking up!Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12700687481057612773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-91592357732810725782013-04-17T08:56:20.285-04:002013-04-17T08:56:20.285-04:00There's definitely a sense of something worse ...There's definitely a sense of something worse underneath, behind, in back, out of sight, trying to be noticed.<br />Quite a haunting!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-65335028028150192872013-04-17T04:35:28.746-04:002013-04-17T04:35:28.746-04:00slipping away .. well written
slipping away .. well written<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-41712390286091558652013-04-16T19:34:04.366-04:002013-04-16T19:34:04.366-04:00Yikes, poor thing, those are some horrific images....Yikes, poor thing, those are some horrific images. That's a lot to work through. Is she up to the task? I'll tune in to find out if you continue it.stephhttp://peopledothingswiththeirlives.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-55456052809918566362013-04-16T13:54:44.874-04:002013-04-16T13:54:44.874-04:00It's actually a culmination of how trauma can ...It's actually a culmination of how trauma can manifest that has been hidden in amnesia or repressed in memory. Definitely creepy when it happens. Thanks for reading and commenting, Draug! Creepier than vampires? lol That's soooo scary to me...graphic I guess is correct term. But go, you, cuz I know there are tons of vampire fans. I'm into the Twilight touchie feely emotional vampires ;-OMaggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-86561051042237214362013-04-16T13:51:21.720-04:002013-04-16T13:51:21.720-04:00Thank you so much! I scrolled through tons of phot...Thank you so much! I scrolled through tons of photos of claw foot tubs but that one with just the foot did look creepiest to me too!Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-21610517316082891782013-04-16T13:50:22.682-04:002013-04-16T13:50:22.682-04:00I was a trauma therapist and most who have repress...I was a trauma therapist and most who have repressed or dissociated memories do feel crazy when they begin to surface. Thank you for reading and commenting.Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-73714847215585649052013-04-16T12:38:28.909-04:002013-04-16T12:38:28.909-04:00That is a creepy-ass dream. I don't blame her ...That is a creepy-ass dream. I don't blame her for getting freaked out. I certainly hope it's not based on real events that are happening!Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-26653302134967204702013-04-16T04:20:18.815-04:002013-04-16T04:20:18.815-04:00well narrated.
well narrated.<br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-46996759790862443232013-04-16T01:32:28.234-04:002013-04-16T01:32:28.234-04:00LOVE the continuation, and the picture you used. ...LOVE the continuation, and the picture you used. I think the claw of the tub made it so much more terrifying.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01628986566011233882noreply@blogger.com